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September 14th, 2001, 11:02 AM
#1
Inactive Member
Trees and Ashes
So now that we walk on ashes, and the moon falls and crashes, down into the ocean with nobody else to find it.
The trees repeat faces, their feelings lost in braches. Separate myself from these, that tempts my heart to play,
sing and see.
Would anyone smell flowers that bloom in carbon paper? Breathing in secrecy...
Cos the world outside is all tall trees and same ashes in harmony, no need for you and me. It's just you, or me.
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September 14th, 2001, 01:16 PM
#2
Senior Hostboard Member
Not bad. Some parts rhymed, while others didn't, which was kinda weird. **i'm just not used to that**. This one could use some time for me to chew on
. Perhaps if you could give me a small explanation behind it... (much appreciated...).
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September 15th, 2001, 06:09 AM
#3
Inactive Member
it's about ppl being in a world where nobody cares for each other anymore...just that..like everything's in black and white..
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